Feedback

We decided that we would take our opening into school and have a group of students evaluate it to see what they thought was good, but more importantly what they thought we needed to improve. We also decided to ask our media teacher for his advice in finishing the product finally.
Positives

• Good timing to the music


• Shadow scene very effective


• Tilt shot


• Good pace to the edits


• Smooth transitions


• Good location


• Variety of shots
  
• Good character choice


• Exciting


• Flashbacks used effectively
  

Negatives

• Title pages on too long


• Different font on title page


• First shot could be smoother
  

Overall i am very pleased with the feedback we recieved as there a lot of positives and the negatives given are minor details which can be changed to make the opening better. I think that this was an effective way to engage with the audience and to attract our target audience as the students asked were between 15 - 18 which was perfect. I felt that our strongest aspect of the film is our camera work and edits which make the scene exciting and creates tensions for the audience when they are watching. From this feedback we went away and got together to amend the rough edit, into completing a final edit, taking into account all the feedback we had got from the students and teacher.